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托福写作:常见的六大错误“绊脚石”

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小编摘要:托福写作:常见的六大错误“绊脚石”。

每个句子至少有一个主语和一个动词。一个句子可能包含一个或多个从句,但是从句间应当用分号、逗号或连词正确地连接在一起。动词在单复数上一定要与主语一致,代词与所指代的名词一致。

避免下列句子错误:

问题:句子不完整(破碎句)


Incorrect

Because Earth is our home

Correct

Because Earth is our home, we need to protect our natural resources.

For example, television and computers.

For example, television and computers have impacted family life.

问题:流水句(不正确的从句连接)

Incorrect

Most rrtovies were only one minute long one director put several short films together to make longer movies.

Surface irrigation wastes a lot of water, this water cannot be used for other purposes.

Correct

Most movies were only one minute long; however, one director put several short films together to make longer movies.

Surface irrigation wastes a lot of water, and this water cannot be used for other purposes

问题:多个主语


inCorrect

Private companies they should spend more money to clean up pollution.

The professor she stated that we need to develop more eflFicient methods of irrigation.

Correct

Private companies should spend more money to clean up pollution.

The professor stated that we need to develop more efficient methods of irrigation.
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2012-07-24 17:40 编辑:gy_mandy
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