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托福写作:托福写作常见错误例文找茬

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小编摘要:托福写作常见错误例文找茬。

阅读下面的一段文章(摘自一个考生的综合写作作文):

Some method of irrigation not efficient. For example, flooding a field with water.

The water it collects on the field in a pond then evaporate or passing into groundwater.

So waste a lot of water. Sprinkler system spray water on crops, this is better than flooding however they also waste water. Because use a lot of water they waste.

Generally speaking, surface method of irrigation are not efficient in using water.

这段文章中有许多句子结构错误。有些错误使句子含义不清楚,使作者的意图不明确。你能找出这些错误吗?

现在阅读没有错误的同一段落。

Some methods of irrigation are not efficient. One example is flooding a field with water. The water collects on the field in a pond and then evaporates or passes into

groundwater, which wastes a lot of water. Sprinkler systems spray water on crops,

which is better than flooding; however, they also waste water. Generally speaking,

surface methods of irrigation are not efficient in using water.

在新托福考试中,综合写作作文可以有一些小的语言错误,如果这些错误不至使文章意思不清’仍然可以得高分。但是,假使存在很多错误使得文章意思不明确,结果将是低分。

注意:

1.在综合写作部分,考生有20分-钟时间列提纲、写作、修改。结束前应留出几分钟检查并改正句子语法、用词和拼写错误。

2.评分的依据是看考生如何运用英语的词、句来表达讲座和阅读材料中的重要观点。尽量只使用你熟悉的语法结构。尽量使用简单的句型,避免过多复杂的长句子,以免阅卷人员理解困难。使用合适的词汇:自己的语言和讲座中的关键词。不要照搬阅读材料中的句子。
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2012-07-04 17:41 编辑:gy_mandy
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