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2012年1月1日更新作文机经AA部分(八)

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  11. V1.crystal0620:AA是Oak City建超市是错误的,具体说明,然后结论Slm City不应建超市,因为Oak City.

  V2. a0684925 :考那个Oak city跟Elm city盖mall的那个,上个月JJ原题

  V3. sonntac: OAK CITY开了个Mall,导致了很多问题,所以有建议ELM CITY需要慎重考虑开Mall的提议,最好直接拒掉。

  考古:

  原题:No. 52 The following editorial appeared in the Elm City paper.

  “The construction last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City was a mistake. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage, and arrests for crime and vagrancy have increased in the nearby Oak City Park. Elm City should pay attention to the example of the Oak City mall and deny the application to build a shopping mall in Elm City.”

  思路:

  # 作者所给出的所有问题和商场的建设都是时间上的前后关系而没有给出证据显示他们的因果关系

  # 作者只给出了不好的结果而没有给出好的影响很可能权衡利弊之后被选择的是要开这个商场

  # 这个商场的建立不应该也不能由此就否定以后所有的商场的建立

  * To begin with, the author fails to establish the causal relationship between the shopping mall's opening and the closing of local businesses.

  * Moreover, the author's conclusion is also based on the assumption that the shopping mall has caused the increase in crime and vagrancy.

  * Finally, even if the shopping mall did cause the closing of local business and the increasing crime and vagrancy in Oak City, the author's prediction that Elm City will suffer from the same fate as Oak City is still open to doubt.

  范文:

  (此文根据老题写作)In this editorial the author rebukes Oak City for allowing the construction of a new downtown shopping mall. Citing a number of problems that have occurred since the building of the mail, the author concludes that the residents of Oak City have not benefited from the mail and that Oak City exercised poor judgment in allowing the mail to be built. Among the problems cited by the author are the closure of local businesses, lack of parking in the downtown area, and increased trash and litter in a city park near the mall. Moreover, the author argues that profits derived from sales are not benefiting Oak City because the owner of the mall lives in another city. The author’s argument is problematic in several respects.

  In the first place, the author assumes that addition of the new mall is the cause of the various problems cited. The only evidence offered to support this claim is that the construction of the mall occurred before these problems manifested themselves. However, this evidence is insufficient to establish the claim in question. A chronological relationship is only one of the indicators of a causal relationship between two events.

  In the second place, the author has focused only on negative effects the mall has had on the city. A more detailed analysis of the situation might reveal that the positive benefits for the city far outweigh the problems on which the author focuses. For example, new jobs might have been created for the residents of Oak City, and tax revenues might have been increased for the city. Lacking a more comprehensive analysis of the impact of the mail on Oak City, it is presumptuous on the part of the author to conclude that Oak City’s decision to allow the mall to be built was incorrect.

  In conclusion, the author’s argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to demonstrate that the construction of the mall caused the various problems mentioned. The author would also have to show that the negative effects of the project outweighed the positive effects.

  以上就是2012年1月1日更新的GMAT作文机经AA部分,考生可以适当借鉴,并通过练习来掌握GMAT作文的解题规律,从而顺利通过GMAT考试。

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2012-05-22 14:16 编辑:cwf1986
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