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大家来找错之大学专业八级的改错练习--11

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小编摘要:改错是难点所以要多多练习哦。

 Artists use caricature to distort the human face or figure for comic affect, __1__while at the same time capturing an identifiable likeness and suggests the essence __2__of the personality or character beneath the surface. The humor lies in the fact __3__the caricature is recognizable, and yet exaggerated.
  From their origin in Europe as witty sketches, caricature grew through __4__the eighteenth and nineteenth century, becoming enormously popular in __5__the United States early in this century. In 1920s and 1930s especially,
  this lively form of illustration was appeared in newspapers and __6__magazines throughout the country. The caricaturists in this era drew his __7__portraits of important figures primary to entertain. In spirit their work was __8__close to the humor of the fast-developing comic strip and gag cartoon than to the __9__string of political satire. Their subjects were more often amusing than offended __10__by amiable attacks.
  答案:
  1 将affect改为effect,affect是动词。effect是名词。
  2 将suggests改为 suggesting,这是一个以while引导的从句,其中suggest应该与capturing并列。
  3在fact后面加上that,因为引导同位语从句的关系词不可以省略。
  4 将their改为its,这里its指代单数名词caricature
  5 将century改为复数形式
  6 将was省略,appear是不及物动词,不应用于被动语态。
  7 将his改为their,这里指代复数名词 the caricaturists
  8 将primary改为primarily,primarily在这里做状语,修饰不定式短语
  9 将close改为比较级形式closer,从后面的连词than,可以看出,这里使用了比较状语从句
  10 将amusing改为 amused,主语subject(受攻击的人)和amuse的逻辑关系是动宾关系,应使用过去分词形式。

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2012-04-18 10:58 编辑:Day_Day_Up1990
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