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  38. V1 by wildbean大致就是下面的意思

  The more efficient employee is, the more profitable a company is. Information technology has been proven to improve employee performance. And as most of our workers use computer for most of their work, we should invest in the most advanced hardware and software presently available. Ensuring employee has the largest working efficiency can make sure that our company has the largest profit.

  V2 by elva0leeAA:作者给出1.assumption:company with high employee productivity makes more profit.

  两个evidence: 1. best technology equipment improve the employee productivity;

  2. best technology equipment makes more profit.

  最后 conclusion: investment of best technology equipment increases the profit margin of a company.

  可能lz表达不清楚,lz理解是公司通过投资最好的设备,来提高工人的生产力,从而创造更多利润,最后提高了边际利润。lz弱弱地总结了几点argument可能存在的不足:1.assumption不足,high employee productivity不是company makes more profit充分的条件,必须考虑其他causal possibility例如公司策略,竞争环境,设备,成本等等。

  2.第一个evidence缺乏逻辑,best technology equipment 不一定能improve the employee productivity,可能工人太蠢,跟不上设备先进的步伐等等。

  3.第二个evidence逻辑不足,best technology equipment 可能成本太高,profit can not offset the cost云云。

  (最后提到了一下边际利润,可能公司利润已经饱和,过多投入设备只会徒劳无功,有点溶质被析出那种感觉,lz把会计课上的边际利润加上高中的化学结合yy了一下,鄙视我吧。。如果没时间可以忽略。。)2

  考古:

  原题:B3. The following appeared in a memorandum from the information technology department of a major advertising firm:

  “The more efficient a firm’s employees are, the more profitable that firm will be. Improvements in a firm’s information technology hardware and software are a proven way to increase the efficiency of employees who do the majority of their work on computers. Therefore, if our firm invests in the most powerful and advanced information technology available, employee productivity will be maximized. This strategy ensures that every dollar spent on enhanced information technology will help to increase our firm’s profit margins.”

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