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  35. V1 by ai134900 讲的是商店摆放Service center有助于增长商店sales 于是经理建议再多放点餐厅

  36. V1 by crystalwbj AA是university hospital 和private hospital那个 OG43题

  V2 by doggiepapaAA:人们认为大学医院比其他社区医院或是私人医院要好的观念是错误的。大学医院的医生数量少,病人的康复率也低于其他医院。其次,大学医院发的工资少,盈利也没别人高。第三,大学医院的医生经常要肩负讲课,做研究等其他事情,所以会影响他们医病人的质量。所以得出这个结论。

  V3 by tanqingye AA:It is said that university hospital are better than private and community hospital , it is not the case, the university hospital paid less , have fewer staff , lower success surgery rate …..OG 原题。

  V4 by cz900509人们都有misconcept.这个misconcept是这样的:认为私人性质的医院比大学医院好。因为1:私人医院雇佣更多的医生。有更多的利润2:什么region什么的 好像是说私人医院分布广吧不记得了 3:大学医院的医生要给大学生上课 要做研究 要治疗病人 容易分心 而私人独立的医院只要治病人就好了 所以私人比大学好。。。自己吐槽

  V5 by fatalistAA:university hospital和 private hospital:作者说university h不如 other kinds 列了两个理由:

  1、列了一堆数据:什么university employ 20 fewer doctors than private、profit少、success rate of the treatment 小、付给员工的工资少;

  2、University’s doctors divide their time into teaching、····等等,concentrate less on treatment, 所以quality of the university hospital 不如other kind of hospitals

  考古:

  原题: No.43 The following appeared in an article in the health section of a newspaper.

  “There is a common misconception that university hospitals are better than community or private hospitals. This notion is unfounded, however: the university hospitals in our region employ 15 percent fewer doctors, have a 20 percent lower success rate in treating patients, make far less overall profit, and pay their medical staff considerably less than do private hospitals. Furthermore, many doctors at university hospitals typically divide their time among teaching, conducting research, and treating patients. From this it seems clear that the quality of care at university hospitals is lower than that at other kinds of hospitals.”

  有一种普遍的错误观念认为大学医院比社区或私人医院更好。这个想法是无根据的,我们地区的大学医院较之私人医院,少雇15%的医生,对患者的治愈率要低20%,总体利润要小得多,给一户员工的待遇比私人医院低很多。而且,很多大学医院的医生将他们的时间分为教学,直到研究和看病几部分。从此可明显看出大学医院的服务质量比其他医院低。

  思路:

  l 从一个医院的情况就推广到整个太草率

  l 治愈率低可能是因为接受的患者得的病都比较罕见等原因造成的

  l 工资低,总体利润低,时间分配给教学都不能一定说明质量差。可能其他福利好,接受的病人少,教学研究有助于进步

  范文:

  In this argument the author concludes that university hospitals provide no better care than private or community hospitals. The author bases this conclusion on the following claims about university hospitals: the ones in this region employ 15 percent fewer doctors; they have a 20 percent lower success rate in treating patients; they pay their staffs less money; they make less profit than community hospitals; and they utilize doctors who divide their time between teaching, research and treating patients. This argument is unconvincing for several reasons.

  The most egregious reasoning error in the argument is the author’s use of evidence pertaining to university hospitals in this region as the basis for a generalization about all university hospitals. The underlying assumption operative in this inference is that university hospitals in this region are representative of all university hospitals. No evidence is offered to support this gratuitous assumption.

  Secondly, the only relevant reason offered in support of the claim that the quality of care is lower in university hospitals than it is at other hospitals is the fact that university hospitals have a lower success rate in treating patients. But this reason is not sufficient to reach the conclusion in question unless it can be shown that the patients treated in both types of hospitals suffered from similar types of maladies. For example, if university hospitals routinely treat patients suffering from rare diseases whereas other hospitals treat only those who suffer from known diseases and illnesses, the difference in success rates would not be indicative of the quality of care received.

  Finally, the author assumes that the number of doctors a hospital employs, its success rate in treating patients, the amount it pays its staff, and the profits it earns are all reliable indicators of the quality of care it delivers. No evidence is offered to support this assumption nor is it obvious that any of these factors is linked to the quality of care delivered to patients. Moreover, the fact that doctors in university hospitals divide their time among many tasks fails to demonstrate that they do a poorer job of treating patients than doctors at other kinds of hospitals. In fact, it is highly likely that they do a better job because they are more knowledgeable than other doctors due to their teaching and research.

  In conclusion, the author’s argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to demonstrate that university hospitals in this region are representative of all university hospitals, as well as establishing a causal link between the various factors cited and the quality of care delivered to patients.

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2012-04-10 12:14 编辑:cwf1986
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