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雅思A类小作文bar chart例文10

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小编摘要:bar chart是常见的一种雅思作文考核方式,掌握bar chart写作规律对雅思作文总体把握很有帮助。最近的小作文多为组合型或者双图,如何能在不累赘的字数中简洁详细地描述出趋势才是重点。下面让我们看一看这篇范文吧。

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.

  • You should write at least 150 words.
  • Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task.

 

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model answer:

The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. It can be clearly seen that the amount of research funding in many cases did not correlate with the seriousness of the disease in terms of numbers of deaths.

In 1990 there were around 0.2 million deaths from AIDS, 0.1 million deaths from leprosy, 0.3 million deaths from tropical diseases, 0.5 million deaths from diarrhoea, 0.4 million deaths from malaria and 1.8 million deaths from TB. These figures can be contrasted with the amount of funding allocated for each disease. In 1990 AIDS received 180 million dollars in research funding, leprosy 80 million dollars in research funding, tropical diseases 79 million dollars in research funding, diarrhoea 60 million dollars in research funding, malaria 50 million dollars and TB 20 million dollars in research funding.

In conclusion it is clear that funding allocation for disease research in Someland is not wholly determined by the number of deaths for which each disease is responsible in a given year.


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