在线词典,在线翻译

雅思A类小作文范文之图表篇(2)

所属:雅思 阅读:2792 次 评论:0 条 [我要评论]  [+我要收藏]

小编摘要:雅思小作文想拿高分,范文多看是必须的。下面来让我们看一看这篇图表小作文吧。

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Underground Railways Systems

City
Date opened
Kilometres of route
Passengers per year
(in  millions)
London
1863
394
775
Paris
1900
199
1191
Tokyo
1927
155
1927
Washington DC
1976
126
144
Kyoto
1981
11
45
Los Angeles
2001
28
50

The table shows the details regarding the underground railway systems in six cities.

London has the oldest underground railway systems among the six cities. It was opened in the year 1863, and it is already lye years old. Paris is the second oldest, in which it was opened in the year 1900. This was then followed by the opening of the railway systems in Tokyo, Washington DC and Kyoto. Los Angeles has the newest underground railway system, and was only opened in the year 2001. In terms of the size of the railway systems, London, For certain, has the largest underground railway systems. It has 394 kilometres of route in total, which is nearly twice as large as the system in Paris. Kyoto, in contrast, has the smallest system. It only has 11 kilometres of route, which is more than 30 times less than that of London.

Interestingly, Tokyo, which only has 155 kilometres of route, serves the greatest number of passengers per year, at 1927 millions passengers. The system in Paris has the second greatest number of passengers, at 1191 millions passengers per year. The smallest underground railway system, Kyoto, serves the smallest number of passengers per year as predicted.

In conclusion, the underground railway systems in different cities vary a lot in the site of the system, the number of passengers served per year and in the age of the system.
(233 words)

该小作文很好地删选了信息,描述了主要的特点,也找到了考官预料之外的数据并且很好地进行了分析。小作文有一个清晰又精确的概括。信息组织良好,并且用了很多不同的词汇和语法结构。基本上恰当且精准,只有少数错误。词汇偶尔有重复现象。

标签:IELTS 雅思
0
2011-11-21 18:59 编辑:htt0724
分享到:
关注海词微博:
发表评论:
表达一些您的想法吧!已有0条评论>>
登录,再发表评论
文明上网,理性发言!
您可能还感兴趣的文章:
  • [雅思]雅思名师各个击破-写作扣分的语言习惯硬伤

    一、英语重结构,汉语重语义 我国著名语言学家王力先生曾经说过:“就句子的结构而论,西洋语言是法治的,中国语言是人治的。”(《中国语法理论》,《王力文集》第一卷,第35页,山东教育出版
  • [雅思]不用“题海战术” 雅思写作也能拿高分

    在雅思考试的听说读写四门科目中,大多数考生最担心的莫过于写作了,时常会出现投入精力最多、耗费时间最长、考试分数最低的现象,这往往和考生备考方式不合理有关。在雅思写作备考中,考生比较
>>精华推荐阅读
热门评论文章