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小编摘要:G类小作文虽然不是雅思考试中的主角,但是考生们也可以通过关注一些G类范文中出现的语法问题,力求自己不要犯相同的错误。

You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days of purchase it has stopped working. You spoken to the company representative a week ago but it has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain the situation
- say what action you would like to company to take.

Dear Sir/ Madam,


I am writing to inform you about the faulty mobile phone that I have purchased in your store.


I am Christine B.(My name is Christine B. ), I am a regular customer of your company. On the 10th of March, I bought a brand new Nokia N73 mobile. However, upon one week of using it, problems started to appear. The flash of the camera is no longer working. Also, the monitor is getting blurred which makes it difficult for me to see the SMS messages clearly. I was very surprised to discover such problems in quite an expensive model.

Naturally, I returned the mobile phone in your store to be replaced with a new one. One of your sales staff(sales staff members) told me that they will send it to me at my home address within one week. However, two weeks have gone without receiving any replacement. I am very upset for(with) your poor service.


In this regard, I insist on getting a refund of my full payment if the replacement will not come within another week.


Yours faithfully,
Christine B.
这封信相当不错,无论从语法,段落句式结构,还是单词,都符合规范。就是有些小错误要注意。

 

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