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小编摘要:雅思G类小作文要求考生看清听么要求,对于已经发生的事情,动词时态要拿捏准。下面来让我们看看这篇小作文吧。

You rented a car from car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain the situation
- say what action you would like to company to take.

Dear Sir/Madam,


I am writing to complain about the air conditioner of my car, which I took on rent(rented) from your company for two weeks. Unfortunately, it has stopped working.


I rented Mercedes Benz(a Mercedes Benz) 8 days ago. My(用and 把两句连在一起) customer number is 1230. Actually, what happened (what happened is when)I was on my way from Jacksonville to Miami, although the atmosphere temperature was cooler, suddenly a sound came from the engine. At first, I thought that the engine belt is(was) broken and I may(might) not be able to drive the car further. However, when I felt no air coming from the air conditioner, I realized it has(had)stopped working.
Naturally, when I got back home, I immediately contacted your customer care center and registered my complaint. They issued me a complaint number 234343 and said that they will send a technician at my house within 2 to 3 business days to get it repaired. Almost one week has passed since I called, but still it is not being repaired.

I am not at all satisfied with your customer service. In case, you can’t resolve my problem within 2 business days after the receipt of this letter, I want a complete refund of my rent which I paid in advance, that is(a total amount of) $200.
Yours faithfully,
Hasnain Siraj
这篇文章按照要求完全了任务,格式正确。段与段之间有正确的连词。语法需要特别注意,特别是时态和介词方面。

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