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小编摘要:写G类作文的时候要根据写的对象不同,用词也要不同哦。下面来让我们看一看这篇G类作文。

You migrated to another country. Write a letter to your friend to describe your present life and tell him/her why you chose this country.

Dear Linda,
I’m sorry I haven’t been writing to you for such a long time. I am writing to inform you(I am writing to let you know,写给朋友的信件不用这么正式) that I have migrated to Perth, Australia. My family and I arrived in Perth on the 03/04/11(不要用数字 the third of April 2011) and we have finally settled down.


We migrated to Perth because my sisters and their family have also migrated there three years ago. We have planed to join them in Perth and also for the children’s education and their future as well.


We have just settled in our new house and the kids are enjoying the pool almost everyday. They have been attending a public school and have made quite a lot of friends. The people here are very friendly and helpful. John has also found a job near the city. The working environment here according to John is very different from Malaysia. And as for me, I am a full time housewife, enjoying the morning coffee with the newspaper.

 

Do let me know when you plan to visit Perth and you are always welcome to stay at my new house.

With love,
Sharon.

这封信件相当不错,结构正确,也按要求完成了任务。句式构造优美,用词准确语言流畅。错误较少。

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