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小编摘要:这篇G类小作文里的一些语法错误可能考生你也可能犯哦。下面让我们来看一看。

Write a letter to a bus company saying you have left something valuable on the bus and tell them what to do if they find it.

Dear Sir/Madam,
The reason I am writing this letter to you is because I have left my bag in your(on your company’s)bus which I took. It was on Tuesday 5th of August 2008 at around 3:00pm. The bus station that I board(where I boarded) the bus was at Jalan Pinang (bus no 55) and got down(off) at Jalan Tujuan.

I have tried to locate the bus and the driver but was unable too. It is a brown bag(The bag I lost was brown) with some samples of costume jewellery of my company. There are 165 pcs(pieces) of it in the bag. Its the last set of samples that I have. With out(Without) the samples its impossible for us to show to our customers(we have nothing to show to our customers).
If you have found it could you please call me at 03 92 6**1 or email me at hus@ hotmail.com and I will arrange to pick it up from your office.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully
H us

这篇文章需要多多返工。虽然按照要求完成了任务,文章结构也正确。但是句式结构需要注意,表达方式也不够精准。语法错误比较多。

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2011-09-20 16:52 编辑:htt0724
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