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小编摘要:雅思G类考试的task1不仅对考生有格式上的要求,对考生故事的编排能力有有着不小的挑战。下面来让我们看一下这篇G类信件吧。

IELTS Letter, topic: Asking for information on scholarships

Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing this letter to request more information about scholarship/Finance(Financial) assistance offered by your College.
I was awaiting in anticipation to enroll next year for the much coveted Diploma in English, but with (due to )unfortunate circumstance(circumstances), I found myself in a financial difficulty.
I would appreciate it if you could steer me in the right path for scholarship information or if the college will be able to gave me(could provide me with) financial assistance.
My certificate in Secondary education shows above average grades. I have worked in a voluntary position on weekends teaching English to young foreign kids. I do have the means to pay back if a loan is granted by the college. My employer will vouch for my employment and provide you with my earnings, and he could also arrange a monthly deduction from salary to your bank account.
I believe I have what it takes and I trust you would consider me setback, by giving me the opportunity to study further.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,M Munsamy

这封信不仅严格按照题目要求,而且有很好的结构,体现了英语的使用能力,句型也有复杂性,语法和拼写错误都较少。

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2011-09-14 18:17 编辑:htt0724
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