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雅思写作之如何做conclusion

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小编摘要:一篇好的作文应该有“虎头,猪肚,豹尾”,由于考官阅卷量大,在每次阅卷的时候都有着严格的时间控制。如何让考官在开头结尾处眼前一亮是关键。那么下面让我们来看一看怎样写conclusion才是符合雅思标准的吧。

Conclusion就是对应卷中提出的问题自己的答案。考生容易犯下的错误一般是没有对所给的问题得出自己的结论或者只是给出部分自己答案。下面看下两个关于salary的例子:

问题是:In many countries people working in sport and entertainment earn much more money than professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. Why do you think this happens in some societies and do you consider it is good or bad?


Conclusion 1.
In my opinion it is unjust that a sports star such as David Beckham earns far more money than a doctor whose work is invaluable in saving peoples’ lives. The principle reason for saying this is that the doctor clearly makes a much more valuable contribution to society than someone who is involved in the entertainment industry.


Conclusion 2.
I personally believe that in the ideal world someone’s income would relate to their value to society. However, in the modern world, it is almost unavoidable the famous will have the highest incomes because of their media exposure.


大家认为哪一个比较好呢?其实比起结论1来说,结论2更加好,因为它很清楚地回答了一个问题的两个方面,而结论1只是注重作者的观点。在做conclusion的时候,一定要重新看看问题是什么,尤其注意要讨论两方面的问题。在做结论的时候,你所要做的就是对你前文已经给出的信息进行重新叙述,重新改写,不要在结尾处提出新的想法,因为那个是在body part里就应该完成的。

下面是雅思conclusion 可以借鉴的一些模板:

1. In a word, ________________________________________________。So, it is sagacious /sensible to support the statement that it is better to__________________________________。


2. In a word,__________________________________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that___________。

3. In summary, ____________________________________. It could be safely assumed that  ___________________________________.Therefore,  ________________________________.

4. In summary, while there are arguments to be made for both sides, it is clear that there are greater advantages of __________________________________ because of the above mentioned reasons.

5. To a certain extent I agree that ________________________________ . However, I also believe that  _______________________________.

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