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雅思5分作文评析

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小编摘要:雅思5分作文是中国烤鸭比较多的分数段,如何避免一些常见错误才是王道。下面让我们来看看该考生犯了哪些错误。


Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.

It is certainly said that learning is an ongoing process .Every person learn(learns) something new according to(depending on) their age, experience knowledge and education. According to my point of view it is always better to have teacher or guide for study.
 

One teacher has adequate knowledge to teach their student. He(He or she) knows all the possible(many possible ,all太绝对了) ways to make subject easier for the students, even he teaches them in effective manner. For example, some students are weak in some subjects but a teacher always guides(太绝对,usually can assist) them according to their mental capacity. He teaches them as fun(意思不明,可能是要表达His way of teaching is fun这个意思). Some people can learn better in group by discuss(a group by discussing) the topics with others. In class people can know(learn about) the others' views, even they know how we can learn effectively(confusing sentence). Where the teacher always give easy direction to learn.

In the today's competitive world, everbody is busy, some people think that rather to waste(instead of wasting) their time to go for (going to) classes they can learn better regarding their subject . They can attend online classes by using internet at home. They can get relevant information from internet regarding their topic. There is not(no) specific time, age limit to learn something new. Some thing new which we always learn only with the experience such as atequates, knowledge, new habits and so on.

In sum up(To sum up), I would like to say that it is always better for the people to have teacher because one teacher has good knowledge, experience and education to teach others. They can take learn easy from him rather by themselves.

该文章开始是连段落都没的。在写雅思学术作文时,一定要客观,避免用always never这种绝对的表达方式。文章题目要求是which do you prefer,但是作者只讨论了一个方面。审题要清楚。 

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