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2011年7月gmat作文机经AA (至7.31)(三)

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 5. 有个生产裤子、衣服的公司sold by various retail outlets,因为5年以来效益都很好,决定自己开125家retail stores。并且他的CEO是一个 rock star,有影响力,所以这个公司一定会成功,因此建议员工都来买公司的股票。

 没有原题,考古

V1说的是有一个服装品牌面向的客户主要是年轻人,原来这个品牌都在一些折扣店里经营。最近这个品牌决定在全国开设自己的专卖店,评论认为将会取得很好的销量因为这个品牌的CEO曾经是一个rock star

 V2. Crow’s head company什么的 五年前衣服销量不错 打算再开125家分店什么的。。然后说顾客一定会买因为他们的CEO是rock star 然后有个management team pursue expansion 还有个原因。。失忆了。。。。

我用的是过去推现在,无理假设

V3. 说一个clothes的company 在前4年销售很不错,所以计划自己新开 125retail store, 自己管理,然后说因为顾客会感觉到公司在expansion 所以会来买,而且ceo of this company is a former rock star,所以相信这个计划会成功。

攻击点比较清楚:

1 连续5年增长和retail outlets 不代表是hot trend.

2 开125家店需要大量投资,现金风险太大,能否收回投资完全没把握。

3 former的rock star 是否仍然受欢迎。而且公司目标群是youth,以前的fans都会变大,不再年轻。

提供观点:

1、过去5年盈利不保证将来也会盈利,新的销售渠道的建立(改变销售渠道)可能会对销量产生负面影响

2、不充分:有实力管理激进不能推断出股东能获利

3、前摇滚明星有知名度有粉丝,但管理好公司还需要专业的CEO

4、前摇滚明星不能保证在未来的一代青年人中一直保持高知名度

 

6. 用电脑教学后撤学率下降而且毕业生也很优秀,所以要加大资金拖入比例来买电脑

题库原题:

14. The following appeared as part of a newspaper editorial.

“Two years ago Nova High School began to use interactive computer instruction in three academic subjects. The school dropout rate declined immediately, and last year’s graduates have reported some impressive achievements in college. In future budgets the school board should use a greater portion of the available funds to buy more computers, and all schools in the district should adopt interactive computer instruction throughout the curriculum.”

Discuss how well reasoned... etc.

14. The following appeared as part of a newspaper editorial.“Two years ago Nova High School began to use interactive computer instruction in three academic subjects. The school dropout rate declined immediately, and last year’s graduates have reported some impressive achievements in college. In future budgets the school board should use a greater portion of the available funds to buy more computers, and all schools in the district should adopt interactive computer instruction throughout the curriculum.”

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Sample essay 1:

The argument that the school board should buy more computers and adopt interactive computer instruction is not entirely logically convincing, since it ignores certain crucial assumptions.

First, the argument assumes that the decline of school dropout and the achievements of last year’s graduates’ results from the adoption of interactive computer instruction. However, there are several reasons why this might not be true. For example, achievements could have been made in other subjects than the ones with interactive computer instruction. Or last years’ graduates might not have been given the interactive computer instruction. Or the decline of the rate of dropout could be attributed to stricter discipline applied last year.

Second, even supposing the Nova High School’s decline of the dropout and last year’s graduates’ achievements benefit directly from the usage of interactive computer instruction, the success of the instruction in one school may not ensure the success in other schools. If it does not suit other schools, the instruction will not work.

Finally, even if the decline of the rate of dropout and the achievements of the last year’s graduates’ are the direct results of the interactive computer instruction, we still do not know whether the school can afford to apply the instruction on all the subjects or to all the students. If the school does not have sufficient fund and has to cut budgets on other projects such as the library, the quality of the school’s education will also compromise.   

Thus, the argument is not completely sound. The evidence in support of the conclusion that the dropout rate declined and last year’s graduates made impressive achievements does little to prove the conclusion that other schools should use a greater portion of their funds to apply the instruction since it does not address the assumptions I have already raised. Ultimately, the argument might have been strengthened by making it clear that the decline of the dropout rate and the achievements of the graduates are the direct results of interactive computer instruction, that the instruction is also applicable to other schools in the district, and that the instruction is affordable to all the schools in the district.

Sample essay 2:

The editorial recommends that the school board of Nova High spend a greater portion of available funds on the purchase of additional computers and adopt interactive computer instruction throughout the curriculum. Two reasons are offered in support of this recommendation. First, the introduction of interactive computer instruction in three academic subjects was immediately followed by a decline in the school dropout rate. Second, last year’s graduates experienced impressive achievements in college. This argument is unconvincing for two reasons.

To begin with, this argument is a classic instance of “after this, therefore because of this” reasoning. The mere fact that the introduction of interactive computer instruction preceded the impressive performance of recent graduates and the decline in the dropout rate is insufficient to conclude that it was the cause of these events. Many other factors could bring about these same results. For example, the school may have implemented counseling and training programs that better meet the needs of students who might otherwise leave school to take jobs. In addition, the school may have introduced programs to better prepare students for college.

Secondly, the author assumes that the impressive achievements of last year’s graduates bear some relation to the introduction of interactive computer instruction at Nova High. However, no evidence is offered to support this assumption. Lacking evidence that links the achievements of the recent graduates to the interactive instruction, it is presumptuous to suggest that the computer instruction was in some way responsible for the students’ impressive performance.

In conclusion, the recommendation that Nova High spend a greater portion of available funds on the purchase of additional computers and adopt interactive computer instruction throughout the curriculum is ill-founded. To strengthen this recommendation the author would have to demonstrate that the decline in the dropout rate and the impressive performance of recent graduates came about as a result of the use of computer-interactive instruction. All that has been shown so far is a correlation between these events.

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2011-08-29 10:04 编辑:cwf1986
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