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英语四级六级作文训练营:改词扩句(第十一期)

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本期继续我们的话题,主讲改词

原句:

Unfortunately, it has also caused some problems never thought of. When we are faced with the dilemma, should we carry on the practice?

改句:

Unfortunately, it has also given rise to some unexpected problems. Confronted with the dilemma, should we carry on the practice?

【解析】细看原句,我们首先在词上进行替换,“cause”比“give rise to”这个词组用的多,属于作文常用词汇,所以在考场上用“give rise to”是个亮点。同理,“faced with”改成“confronted with”,意思也是丝毫未变的。然后,原句中使用了定语从句,当然这也是可以的,但是在这里改成"unexpected"更为简洁清楚。最后,原句中 “when”后面跟的主语和主句一致,所以我们可以直接去掉“when we are”。

下面大家自己试试看吧!


When we depend on other countries to win the election, we think we will pay for it some day.

答案:


Depending on other countries to win the election, we think we will pay for it some day.

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2011-05-13 15:07 编辑:甯老师
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