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英语四级六级作文训练营:改词扩句(第五期)

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今天继续来学习如何通过改词来提高作文水平,本期主讲连词的替换

原句:

Although the development of science and technology has brought the process to mankind, our surrounding natural environment is greatly destroyed.

改句:

The development of science and technology has brought the process to mankind while our surrounding natural environment is greatly destroyed.

【解析】

原句是一句典型的转折句,在四六级作文中,"although"和"though“的应用相当广泛,那么如何使自己与众不同呢,在此,我为大家推荐一个连词”while“,这个单词有很多意思,但在改句中,它的意思是”虽然、尽管“,在考场上用的人相对比较少,所以以后在作文中,如果出现了转折、对比之类的关系句,记住要想到”while“哦!

下面大家来试试吧!

Existing employees have made concessions, such as higher retirement ages, but it is near impossible to reduce the payments made to existing pensioners.

答案:

While existing employees have made concessions, such as higher retirement ages, it is near impossible to reduce the payments made to existing pensioners.

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2011-05-08 13:06 编辑:甯老师
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