In order to live a good life, it is becoming more and more important for people to learn knowledge well. Because in this modern world, knowledge is everything.
In order to live a happy(wonderful) life, it is becoming increasingly important for people to acquire knowledge well, for the reason that knowledge is everything in this modern world.
首先我们看到原句中出现了more and more，在四六级作文中，它可算是常客，对阅卷老师而言，不具任何吸引力，而且有落入俗套的危险哦，所以在我们把它用一个简单的副词来替代，副词修饰形容词，相信会令人感觉眼前一亮。
其次，我们还要注意一个搭配问题，原句中的learn knowledge是明显的中式英语，很多同学会误用，正确的搭配应该是acquire knowledge。
1.China is developing very fast in recent years.
China is highly developed in recent years.
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