原句：I did not consider that factor carefully.
改句：I fail to take that factor into careful consideration.
在这个简单句中，主要做了两个改变，一是把"did not"改成"fail to", 同样的意思，可是词汇应用的灵活度却大大提高。
二是把"consider…carefully"改成了"take sth into careful consideration"，在考场作文中，词组的运用是个亮点，而且英语中静态居多（名词用的多），汉语中动态居多（动词用的多），在此把动词"consider"变成名词"consideration"，顿时使英文更加地道。
1.With the development of society, people pay more and more attention to the quality of life.
2.They live a happier life. They take part in all kinds of social activities and have more holidays.
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2.They live a happier life,participating in social activities of all conceivable kinds and enjoying more holidays.
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